I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 13 September 2018
I NEED YOUR ''HELP''
For the last 3 weeks, we are going to have commenting challenged
Here is the challenge
I need your help by commenting on my blog because in the last 3 weeks our teacher has a challenge for us. If you receive a comment, you will get points, whoever has the most point win the challenge. By the end of the term, the student most point will get a prize.
PLEASE HELP ME WITH THIS CHALLENGE I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE IT. THANK YOU!
10 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello JV!
ReplyDeleteI am excited to be your first comment! I like how you explained what your challenge was and that your DLO gives instructions on how to comment, in case your reader is unsure.
A suggestion would be to start with #1 on the left side and then put step #2 on the right so that when we read it, it makes a little bit more sense.
Keep up the great work and good luck with your competition!
- Miss Birtch
Kia ora JV, I like your poster with clear instructions about how you want people to comment on your work. I would like to know more about how your friends can follow your blog, what do they need to do?
ReplyDeleteGreat job JV!
Whaea Raewyn
Thank you Miss Birtch and Miss Whaea Raewyn for commenting my blog, I really appreciate it.
ReplyDeletegood luck with the challenge jv
ReplyDeleteGood luck for the challenge JV 👍 :)
ReplyDeleteWow J.V. .... you're a blogger now! Well done.
ReplyDeleteMrs. A
Hi JV, you've done really well to engage readers to comment on your blog. You've gave clear instructions on what to do. I hope you do well on this challenge. Good Luck!! Bye!!
ReplyDeleteWhat clear instructions JV! That's really helpful for anyone who doesn't know how to comment on a blog. As Miss Birtch said, I'd swap point 1 and 2 around so it follows the way we naturally read. Good work!
ReplyDeleteAll the best with the challenge JV!
ReplyDeleteWhat a amazing blog post JV!, you've done a really good work and effort. I liked how you put a Introduction at the start of your sentences and end with a Conclusion, I also like how you explained to us what you are going to do And also thank you for teaching us how to comment on someones blog. I would like to see more blog post you've done! Good luck for the challenge JV!
ReplyDeleteRhona Jean