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Monday, 25 March 2019

W.A.L.T Add move derail to sentences

We played a game for a couple of hours.
We played a competitive game for a couple of hours.
This morning we played a competitive game for a couple of hours.

This morning we played a competitive game for a couple of hours.
This morning we played a serious competitive game for
a couple of challenging hours.
This morning we played a serious competitive game for a couple of challenging hours outside our house.
This morning we played a serious competitive game for a couple of challenging hours outside in our house while we are freezing cold.

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2 comments:

  1. Whaea Raewyn3 April 2019 at 19:46

    Kia ora JV, I am impressed with the detail that you have added into your sentences, they are so much more interesting to read don't you think? I am looking forward to seeing more detailed sentences next time we do some writing! One thing that you could think about next time is checking that your blog post looks ok after you have posted your work. Some of the text is running off on the right side and it is difficult to read in some places. Awesome work JV!

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  2. Anonymous8 April 2019 at 21:35

    ok miss davis thank you

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