Text Title: Tokyo Olympics - British sprinters positive drug test confirmed, set to lose silver medal
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I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Text Title: Tokyo Olympics - British sprinters positive drug test confirmed, set to lose silver medal
Text Type: Article
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Hello JV I really liked your blog post about the Tokyo Olympics and I liked how. You added good information about Ujah that returned with drug positive. And how he had reacted to the news talking about him I also liked how you added a picture of him so we know who he looks like this is a good blog post keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHi JV,
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog post about Ujah testing positive for drugs. You've added brief information on what happened and what Ujah said after getting testing positive. You have answered the critical literacy question really well. Next time, you should include the source you got the information from. Keep up the great work.