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Monday, 8 March 2021

Sensory Language

Welcome to another post on my blog, Today, I complete another activity fro the Creative Writing unit for English. This fourth activity is Sensory Langauge, I had to make my own sentence using the words see, smell, taste, feel.


Sensory Langauge


It was a Hot Sunny day,  The sun so bright like a Gold and Diamond, The bird singing up the tree and it was a quiet place where you can sit and chill. The view is colourful with lots of trees, you can see the mountain. The water is very clear like air. I feel the freshness of the air. The water is very cold like a block of frozen ice. The flowers are crystal clear and smell like perfume.

1 comment:

  1. Great job, JV
    your work is fantastic with the explanation on what Sensory Language is!
    Your example brings me a vivid imagination on what your talking about. The Simile that you used "The sun so bright like a gold and diamond" was cool because gold and diamonds are rich and bright and in my POV your explaining that the sun is as beautiful as a diamond. Great job and i'm looking foward to reading another one of your blog posts!

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