Title: Skink gully
Text Type: Book
Text Creator: Des Hunt
Critical literacy question: What do the words suggest?
Date: Friday, May 28,2021
This story was about 5 people who want to go somewhere but end up losing to their destination and when the sun was close to setting behind a range of hills by the time they reached the destination. Suddenly they found something that it has a roof and the boys called it a cottage. They went into the cottage and checked if someone was there, and when they went inside, no one was inside. They think that maybe they can like have 1-night sleep there and when it's morning they continue walking around. When it was their first morning in the hut, they found a shotgun and it has ammo that hasn't been used yet.
Hey J.V,
ReplyDeleteI really like you little introduction that you have put on here, i like how you included how the boys felt when they saw the cottage and all the information that you have spreaded throughout the post,
I just wanna say just try to put more information into the text and post next time, there is a bit of imformation but just try add a tiny bit more to make the story or poem a bit more interesting to read.
But overall that was a great post,
Keep up the good work